Joan Didion Text
Didion displays a very
ominous view of the Santa Ana winds. She opens with solemn words like,
"uneasy" ans " "unnatural" then ends in a very sad
tone. Her choice of words show her anxiety and distrust for against the Santa
Ana winds. Beginning with her opinion she then migrates over to a chosen quote
by Raymond Chandler. After the quote she moves on to examining some science and
statistics of the wind and its causes. Many of her adjectives are objective
towards the winds.
Throughout her writing
Didion uses words like, "consciously, ominously, and
malevolent" to convey her emotions. This diction represents a strong
uneasy feeling towards the winds. Each of those words (with many others) are
emotionally packed and are used to give the reader some of the same feelings as
of those in one of her quotes. Every single paragraph repeats these emotions
with new words to reinstate the feelings. Some might describe the winds as
refreshing where as she carefully uses her words to show us that the Santa Ana
winds are not just an ignorable factor of life. She shows these winds mean
something and that something is an untrustworthy force.
In addition to her diction,
Didion effectively pairs words with imagery. As Didion says, "We know it
because we feel it. The baby frets. The maid sulks. I rekindle a warning
argument with the telephone company, then cut my losses and lie down."
Didion's choice of imagery reflects one of submission to the winds. She uses
the actions of people to personify the winds as a higher being. The wind isn't
just a current of moving air, but a reflection of "a deeply mechanistic
view of human behavior." By using this imagery Didion allows the readers
to consciously recognize the effect of the winds. Didion says, "the heat
surreal. The sky had a yellow cast, the kind of light sometimes called
earthquake weather". This ominous and dream-like state of being is an
unhappy and foreshadowing tone. One can only imagine what it is like then and
there in that foreboding time but is left to ponder the results of the
description. Beginning with two short paragraphs Didion then goes on to a
longer, more complex, more detailed view on the winds. This structure is
preparing the reader for a buildup of emotion, that is let go with, "one
cannot get much more mechanistic than that". This style tells the reader
that more has yet to come, that Didion is not finished but whens she does
finish it will still reflect the truth of her opinion.
Finally
Didion ends her writing with a solemn tone and "mechanistic"
description. Didion closes off with the same feelings she began with. The Santa
Ana winds are not to be opposed, they are a force that should be feared and
closely watched.
Your opening paragraph seems hasty and rushed. You shouldn't come so quickly...when opening your introduction. Your choices and analysis could've been more detailed but the overlaying ideas are understood. Also your last sentence is confusing.
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