Argumentation of Celebrity
Endorsed Advertising
What Sue Jozui stated is logically concluded.
Celebrity endorsed advertising can be insulting to the audience, but her
opinion is self-centered. Jozui based others' opinions off of how she feels
which is unethical. Though her opinion is agreeable she lacks any
statistical/numerical values to prove her point. The use of celebrities is a
company's tactic to increase the number of buyers. If a company wants to use a
celebrity and said celebrity agrees to the notion then that's a personal
choice. Promotion is a necessary economic benefactor and its commercial use
doesn't directly harm the audience making the idea of boycotts seem arbitrary.
Jozui's
argument states "Am I going to buy the newest SUV because an attractive
talk-show host gets paid to pretend he drives one? I don't think so" which
is biased to herself. Jozui is using how she feels as a basis for how others
feel, but her opinion doesn't reflect others without evidence. It's clear that
Jozui's argument is based off of her emotions which could fluctuate on any
given topic. Sure, a talk-show host gets paid to drive a car, is that a bad
thing? Is he being forced to? Does he hate that company? Obviously not if he's
promoting the car. It was out of his own free will to promote the car just like
it is the audiences own free will do to pay attention to the advertisement.
Jozui states "we should boycott this kind
of advertising and legislate rules and guidelines for advertisers" which
is far too vauge. The use of "we" is arbitrary for it fails to state
whom those people are. They could vary from those who just want celebrity
advertisements out-ruled to those who are looking for enormous changes in the
entire marketing industry. this vaugeness calls for people to be more attentive
to what she is writing. She lacks evidence to support her claim and fails to
provide us with a quick yet more in depth view on her opinions.
One more
thing Jozui does is make a statement without supporting it, which is wrong.
Jozui says "This kind of marketing is misleading and insults the
intelligence of the audience." But how? In what way is this form of
advertisement offending the audience? Jozui implies that people are being
offended but fails to state by what exactly and also who is being insulted.
Jozui's arguement has the proper structure for discussion, yet in itself fails
to be discussed.
This overly vague, unsupported, under developed argument leads to the question
of whether Jozui is well-informed on the topic or if she is just formally
stating her opinion. People can be insulted but how someone takes an indirect
insult is obviously a personal decision. the companies do not strive to insult
the audience on purpose, what would be the point of advertising if this was the
case. Abraham Lincoln once said "You can fool some of the people all of
the time, all of the people some of the time, but never all of the people all
of the time." In this lies the message that one can never fool everybody
and celebrity endorsed advertisements fool no one, for it can not fool all of
the people.
The introduction paragraph is unclear on the writers argument but then elaborates into a well structured essay followed by quotes and analysis.Although the introduction is not well written the final statement well accommodates the essay.
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