AP English Language
Per. 4 1-28-15
Environmentalists
Debates
Debates on the
unproductive nature of environmentalists have widely accumulated over the
years. The views of who does what and to what does it avail, vary from
different perspectives. In the passages written by Edward O. Wilson, Wilson
expresses both points of view of the nature of environmentalists and the nature
of those who critic them. Wilson separates the two groups but also relates the
groups. To keep the opinions clear Wilson often switches his tone between
satirical and critical. Each passage exposes the flaws of one another by
providing a multitude of criticisms.
The
first passage opens by using the way people address environmentalists or,
“environmental wackos” (line 4). The use of the names is an opening tactic
Wilson uses to prepare the audience for the next set of insults that come,
which attack the environmentalist’s political position. According to the
“people-first critics”, environmentalists have a, “hidden agenda that always
comes from the left, usually far left.” Wilson uses these accusations to state
the obvious. Groups always accuse each other of power play. What use is this?
One can accuse another but that doesn’t accomplish much. Wilson then ends by
making a parallel between the power play to the people first critics want for
“a strong, growing free-market economy…” In doing this Wilson shows that it
apparently isn’t just the “wackos” who are concerned with where the power lay.
Each
passage is also shown to reflect one another. The pro-environmentalists are
opened with their stereotypical names against the “brown-lashers” or “sage
brush rebels” (line 39-42). Wilsons parallel shows that the argument of the
environmentalists may as well have the same structure as that of the critics.
The passage then summarizes what the environmentalists feel “right-wing” (line
47) critics have on their agendas. They’re apparently empty agenda from the
views of the environmentalists.
Both
passages contain and reflect the same backhanded remarks you’d find in any
children’s discussions. Wilson effectively express the views of both sides also
showing how each side is flawed. Not directly stating any of it its clear that
neither side is coming in with credible sources or providing a strong support
to base their notions on, They try to do this through accusation and assaulting
one another making hast generalizations.
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ReplyDeleteThe writer begins the essay with an overview of the topic of environmentalist debates that will be discussed further along. The thesis is immediately evident in the introductory paragraph in the line, "To keep the opinions clear Wilson often switches his tone between satirical and critical". The following paragraphs successfully analyze the rhetoric used in each argument. Overall, the essay goes over what is necessary and could be improved with further analysis of detail.
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